Friday, January 20, 2012

Close Your Eyes

 

Now it is dark

and you are  all alone

close your eyes     in your quiet room

picture me  standing  behind your chair

and   feel my hands   gently stroking the back of your neck

empty your mind

and come with me

to another world  for an hour or two

and  in this place   their will be  just us too

 just   making  sweet love    under    a golden  sun

and  bathing  in a blue lagoon      and sipping  fruit coctails    through a straw    untill  the sun goes down and    our  hours   are done and   it is time to open  your eyes   again

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding 2012
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19 comments:

  1. Mono lythJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:20 AM

    I got all caught up in this one... love it

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  2. Manuel FerreiraJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:23 AM

    You have wonderful dreams my dear friend Rosiex. Thank you with my best regards.

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  3. Beverly VanBurenJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:28 AM

    does he read you as well as you write? In your mind's eye, is he equally satisfying? Then, your work is complete. Each dream must be.

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  4. EnglishLady EnglishLadyJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:29 AM


    I really do hope so my dear.... one can never know what the other is thinking unless they are your soulmate , hoping so my dear hug Rosiex

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  5. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:32 AM

    Another good one

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  6. EnglishLady EnglishLadyJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:46 AM


    Thanks roadyking.... glad you liked this one .... just wrote it an hour or so ago!

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  7. Beverly VanBurenJanuary 20, 2012 at 6:57 AM

    Yes, this is so true. More than a decade ago, I thought I knew who mine was until I was taught not to give up the search. Not an easy lesson, that one. None of my lessons were selected because they were easy. Consider what is is you wish to learn before you choose your lessons. May your heart always be cherished by your mate until it is equally cherished by yourself...it is that valuable.

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  8. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞJanuary 20, 2012 at 7:15 AM

    Great mind you have *-)

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  9. caroline magicJanuary 20, 2012 at 8:15 AM

    ...floats away ..in rosies dream...lovely

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  10. EnglishLady EnglishLadyJanuary 20, 2012 at 8:22 AM


    Thankyou Caroline, yes Rosie dreams all the time lol but they are all beautiful dreams !

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  11. dp ♥January 20, 2012 at 8:24 AM

    very nice meditation/dream

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  12. Beverly VanBurenJanuary 20, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    that's reassuring, rosie.

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  13. EnglishLady EnglishLadyJanuary 20, 2012 at 10:57 AM


    Without dreams life would have no exitement .... in sleep very often we are carried away and see another side of our life , so, always good to dream I think .

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  14. Bernard CJanuary 20, 2012 at 2:30 PM

    Pulling on the same straw is a thing for true romantics :-))

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  15. Beverly VanBurenJanuary 20, 2012 at 2:43 PM

    I enjoy dreams. I have learned to program my own to suit me better.

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  16. Venus ♥January 20, 2012 at 7:58 PM

    Rosie, my passionate friend, your poetry is always a thing of sure beauty and magic.
    The imagery carries one to another time and place and makes the experience almost
    as good as the real thing.....ALMOST.......lol

    Thank you dear friend for another beautiful pen.
    Have a lovely, creative weekend.

    {{{Hugs}}}
    Venus
    ♥ xoxoxo

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  17. fatos canborgilJanuary 21, 2012 at 12:12 PM

    AWWWWW this hurt me a little , nobody would tell me these words just imagination I have to do . Very well written.
    Enjoy the weekend. HUGS

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  18. suhail salehJanuary 21, 2012 at 11:41 PM

    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
    its good dreems

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  19. Sharon KrothJanuary 22, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    Your words show me an image. A beautiful journey between two lovers.
    Great writing Rosie.

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