Sunday, October 16, 2011

A brief affair

 

 A very short  but brief affair

the memories  hidden  safe inside    the two souls that became as one

 a beautiful friendship   simple   and full of  silly  laughter  and fondness for  the same  dreams

 never to  be forgotton

 a meeting  of  minds  on a perfect day   

 that will  be cherished

for  ever  and ever   

It was meant to be 

but   fate   stood in  the way

cruel  but   kind  to those    that  never   ever knew

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011
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18 comments:

  1. Dru ForgottenOctober 16, 2011 at 2:10 PM

    ah fate...it can be mean.

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  2. Bernard COctober 16, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    Bridges between them can be fickle too :-)

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  3. Cinabear CinnamonOctober 16, 2011 at 2:58 PM

    Sigh. Hugs

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  4. belita 747October 16, 2011 at 3:31 PM

    Who can challenge fate! Nice words, Rosie!

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  5. dp ♥October 16, 2011 at 4:19 PM

    the last line is very mysterious!

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  6. Else CederborgOctober 16, 2011 at 5:49 PM

    Fate is a tease - or an executioner ...

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  7. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞOctober 16, 2011 at 6:11 PM

    Beautiful my friend

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  8. doug noakesOctober 16, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    At least they will have the memories of hitting it off for a while.

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  9. ghostt RiderOctober 16, 2011 at 10:35 PM

    wonderful

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  10. Alain LFOctober 17, 2011 at 1:47 AM

    No one can defy fate

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  11. EnglishLady EnglishLadyOctober 17, 2011 at 2:34 AM

    Thankyou all for the very inspiring comments on this poem, Dannette picked up on the last line .... nobody got hurt only the two that became one !

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  12. Dutch BlondieOctober 17, 2011 at 5:14 AM

    so very very true.............

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  13. Marcia MorseOctober 17, 2011 at 7:26 AM

    so sweet,

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  14. caroline magicOctober 17, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    ah beautiful.. a lovely dreamy event

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  15. Sharon KrothOctober 17, 2011 at 12:23 PM

    This poems is filled with tears and smiles, laughter and pain. In the end, the pain is only felt by the two of them.

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  16. EnglishLady EnglishLadyOctober 17, 2011 at 12:25 PM

    Yes , but they are left with sweet memories , better than nothing at all !

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  17. Sharon KrothOctober 17, 2011 at 1:26 PM

    So true

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  18. Sharon KrothOctober 17, 2011 at 1:27 PM

    So true

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