The dream was so beautiful
we became lost in our own music
the interludes brought us waves of sheer pleasure and the night went on forever
before you left we composed a lasting overture that had all the right notes for a perfect ending
and a tune we will never forget
never to be played by anyone else because it is written into our souls
Cpyright Rosie Fielding2011
beautiiful,I can feel the music,,
ReplyDeleteWhat lovely words, it dose make u think, ty for sharing your lovely peom. Take care have a nice day. Hugs
ReplyDeleteA tune of our own. I like that. Gm lady rosie.
ReplyDeleteyou have a lovely talent for this, thats for sure :) 'write' on!! :o)
ReplyDeleteA sweet sonnet of seduction
ReplyDeleteI agree with pixie..I can feel it
ReplyDeletethank you ,beautiful
ReplyDeleteeppe
A Rose
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Is Music To My Ears
Can You Hear It
Can You See It
The Beauty Of It
The Music
The Majic
A Rose
ReplyDeleteMagic !
I wish you a nice evening and send you lots of love
Christine
Man, I need a night like this, Rosie.....lol
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful pen, dear Rosie. I'm with Caroline, I feel the music
and rhythm as it beats in my own heart and soul..... Beautiful imagery
Thank you Rosie, for another great pen.... enjoy your evening and the rest of the week.
Hugs and love,
Venus
♥ xoxo
Unfortunately it never lasts.... the waves that is...cause we all forget about the tides
ReplyDeleteGood one though :-)
Nice interlude and presence all finely tuned indeed :-)
ReplyDeleteThat's the best song: Written in & touched by both Souls.
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