Wednesday, November 16, 2011

A Touch Of Love

Hidden inside my soul

a serenade plays

when I think of you

we dance  a slow waltz

to the sounds of   the strings humming   sweetly

and  our bodies  sway in tune  making us  melt

 like putty  into  a  world   beyond  love    and  into   our own comfort zone 

  taking with us  nothing  but   pure  elixiar   that  only the two of us   can ever share 

forever    besotted  and  totally connected   by   sharing   one soul that just became fused  together 

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011

24 comments:

  1. Thankyou Roadyking ... you liked my words then?, wrote this early this morning at breakfast .... my mind was in overdrive lol I tend to think rather clearly at this hour and late at night too for some reason !

    ReplyDelete
  2. Your writings are amazing....keep up the good work, please ;-)

    ReplyDelete
  3. I very much appreciate your comments and get greatly inspired by them all, I write freely from my heart and whatever words spill out from my imagination then they result in another poem !

    ReplyDelete
  4. Remembering the past or thinking at the future ???

    ReplyDelete

  5. The future maybe .... that is not to say that their are not any skeletons hiding in my minds closet lol?

    ReplyDelete
  6. Loves sweet chords strumming the strings of our hearts

    ReplyDelete
  7. I have experienced sweet and dreamy moments like that but, strangely, love is not involved. More like a passing dream but memorable.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Rosie, this is one of your best poems... I really love it... beautiful imagery, nice flood of words... Thanks!

    ReplyDelete
  9. Thankyou dear Belita for your beautiful comment .... I am very inspired by my friends comments always glad you liked this one , I wrote it very quickly indeed at breakfast!

    ReplyDelete
  10. Feeling a bit like Wallace and Grommit reading this one Rosie :-)

    ReplyDelete

  11. Lol , your imagination is on track too Bernard thanks !

    ReplyDelete
  12. The touch of love reminds me of Sade - Rosie.

    ReplyDelete
  13. It's original and that of your own but it does. :)

    ReplyDelete
  14. Yes, all of my poetry is original.... I write from my soul too thankyou for your nice comment initiativestainx

    ReplyDelete
  15. We have known each other for over two years my dearest.

    ReplyDelete
  16. Yes we have indeed , a firm and comfortable friendship it is too my dear!

    ReplyDelete
  17. That is a very beautiful poem, Rosie.

    ReplyDelete
  18. When the waltz has started
    The two of us dancing together
    Dancing in passion and Tenderness
    Untill the clock ticks hither....

    ReplyDelete
  19. Beautiful words to compliment my poem Franky thankyou my friend !

    ReplyDelete