Hidden inside my soul
a serenade plays
when I think of you
we dance a slow waltz
to the sounds of the strings humming sweetly
and our bodies sway in tune making us melt
like putty into a world beyond love and into our own comfort zone
taking with us nothing but pure elixiar that only the two of us can ever share
forever besotted and totally connected by sharing one soul that just became fused together
All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011
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ReplyDeleteThankyou Roadyking ... you liked my words then?, wrote this early this morning at breakfast .... my mind was in overdrive lol I tend to think rather clearly at this hour and late at night too for some reason !
ReplyDeleteYour writings are amazing....keep up the good work, please ;-)
ReplyDeleteI very much appreciate your comments and get greatly inspired by them all, I write freely from my heart and whatever words spill out from my imagination then they result in another poem !
ReplyDeleteRemembering the past or thinking at the future ???
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ReplyDeleteThe future maybe .... that is not to say that their are not any skeletons hiding in my minds closet lol?
Loves sweet chords strumming the strings of our hearts
ReplyDeleteA great comment Campinguy... thankyou !
ReplyDeleteThank you..
ReplyDeleteI have experienced sweet and dreamy moments like that but, strangely, love is not involved. More like a passing dream but memorable.
ReplyDeleteRosie, this is one of your best poems... I really love it... beautiful imagery, nice flood of words... Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThankyou dear Belita for your beautiful comment .... I am very inspired by my friends comments always glad you liked this one , I wrote it very quickly indeed at breakfast!
ReplyDeleteFeeling a bit like Wallace and Grommit reading this one Rosie :-)
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ReplyDeleteLol , your imagination is on track too Bernard thanks !
The touch of love reminds me of Sade - Rosie.
ReplyDeleteOh yes, yes it does !
ReplyDeleteIt's original and that of your own but it does. :)
ReplyDeleteYes, all of my poetry is original.... I write from my soul too thankyou for your nice comment initiativestainx
ReplyDeleteWe have known each other for over two years my dearest.
ReplyDeleteYes we have indeed , a firm and comfortable friendship it is too my dear!
ReplyDeleteThat is a very beautiful poem, Rosie.
ReplyDeleteI love the Slow .Waltz
ReplyDeleteWhen the waltz has started
ReplyDeleteThe two of us dancing together
Dancing in passion and Tenderness
Untill the clock ticks hither....
Beautiful words to compliment my poem Franky thankyou my friend !
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