In my heart
time has stood still
ever since we first met
untill that last day when it all just stopped
frozen in time
but inside my warm heart
the sweet love that we enjoyed
and all the beautiful words that we wrote
now the memories are still potent and real
and shared between the two of us as the days come and go
All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011
It's like neverending
ReplyDeleteYes very much so .... thankyou for your inspiring comment !
ReplyDeleteVery nice wrote! I also wrote something like this long-long-long time ago at the time I was ending my first marriage, and was hurting in my heart.
ReplyDeleteah, the poetess' heart ♥
ReplyDeleteGreat wording; I was just listening to "Time" of the Pink Floyd re-masterised.
ReplyDeleteWow , fancy that Alain.... listening to Time by Floyd and me writing the Title Time to my poem!
ReplyDeleteSometimes, it's good feeling that time has stopped...
ReplyDeleteDon't believe in a Dream or ......... just Go for it with All your Heart.
ReplyDeleteIt's important that IT gives..... YOU a good feeling.
Big hugs & xxx (lots of lol)
Menno
Very inspiring comments indeed , you all spur me on to write more and more thankyou to you all!
ReplyDeleteI love to inspire and to be inspired!
ReplyDeleteThankyou midniterainbow for your beautiful comments I am lucky to have people like you in my Multiply friends list enjoy the new week when it arrives Rosiex
ReplyDeleteNovember 28 my fourth grandson shall be delivered so I will be blessed, indeed. I am glad to know you on Multiply, too.
ReplyDeleteThat warm heart is so obvious, Rosie, that nobody can miss it
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Pen my dear Rosie♥
ReplyDeleteLove with no expectations, always remains
memories are priceless....precious and treasured
Thank you my sweet friend for another lovely pen
Have a wonderful week
Love and hugs
Venus
♥xo
Again, you've done it. Thanks for the lovely writing.
ReplyDeleteThe words of this poem show a love that will never die. Kept warm in the folds of your heart as it grows in your soul.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Rosie. : )
Yes Sharon,
ReplyDeleteThis poem does show that love between the lines that will not die thankyou !
Always good to remember the words - though overtime some may get lost in the malaise..or was that mayonnaise..LOL Nice thoughts Rosie :-))
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