Sunday, November 27, 2011

Time

 

In my heart

time  has stood still

ever since we  first met

untill that last day  when  it all  just  stopped

frozen   in time 

but inside    my warm heart

 the sweet  love     that we  enjoyed

 and  all the  beautiful  words   that we wrote

now       the memories    are still   potent and   real

and  shared     between     the two of us      as the  days   come and go

    

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011

18 comments:

  1. Yes very much so .... thankyou for your inspiring comment !

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  2. Very nice wrote! I also wrote something like this long-long-long time ago at the time I was ending my first marriage, and was hurting in my heart.

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  3. Great wording; I was just listening to "Time" of the Pink Floyd re-masterised.

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  4. Wow , fancy that Alain.... listening to Time by Floyd and me writing the Title Time to my poem!

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  5. Sometimes, it's good feeling that time has stopped...

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  6. Don't believe in a Dream or ......... just Go for it with All your Heart.
    It's important that IT gives..... YOU a good feeling.
    Big hugs & xxx (lots of lol)
    Menno

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  7. Very inspiring comments indeed , you all spur me on to write more and more thankyou to you all!

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  8. Thankyou midniterainbow for your beautiful comments I am lucky to have people like you in my Multiply friends list enjoy the new week when it arrives Rosiex

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  9. November 28 my fourth grandson shall be delivered so I will be blessed, indeed. I am glad to know you on Multiply, too.

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  10. That warm heart is so obvious, Rosie, that nobody can miss it

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  11. Beautiful Pen my dear Rosie♥
    Love with no expectations, always remains
    memories are priceless....precious and treasured

    Thank you my sweet friend for another lovely pen
    Have a wonderful week
    Love and hugs
    Venus
    ♥xo

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  12. Again, you've done it. Thanks for the lovely writing.

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  13. The words of this poem show a love that will never die. Kept warm in the folds of your heart as it grows in your soul.
    Beautiful Rosie. : )

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  14. Yes Sharon,
    This poem does show that love between the lines that will not die thankyou !

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  15. Always good to remember the words - though overtime some may get lost in the malaise..or was that mayonnaise..LOL Nice thoughts Rosie :-))

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