Friday, November 11, 2011

Sin

 

 

 Your what I picture in my mind

when I  long  to touch you and  feel you wrapped  and entwined     with me    in some  motel  miles away  from prying eyes

the thoughts of you   make  my heart flutter  and  my   passion  rise

although my  love is innocent 

my guilt  flows  in me   making me   struggle    to suppress  my  desires

 and when  I  try  to  put you out of my mind   

all I can hear  in my head is   your words   to me  

begging  me not to forget 

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011
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16 comments:

  1. Alain LFNovember 11, 2011 at 1:54 AM

    No sin, let it be...

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  2. Bernard CNovember 11, 2011 at 3:05 AM

    Let not go of the inner sanctum and revell in the thoughts of what might have been...springs to my mind upon reading this... Nicely put :-)

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  3. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 11, 2011 at 3:48 AM

    Thanks Bernard ... a very inspiring comment from you today ... liked it very much indeed thanks!

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  4. Mono lythNovember 11, 2011 at 6:00 AM

    How could one forget this???

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  5. ghostt RiderNovember 11, 2011 at 6:01 AM

    this is intriguing

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  6. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 11, 2011 at 6:19 AM

    Very inspiring comments from you all.... gets the imagination working in overdrive !

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  7. ron aNovember 11, 2011 at 7:08 AM

    Beauty of The Rose

    With every breath
    we inhale
    the warm fragrance
    of its soft petals
    plied together
    having ever lasting beauty
    endowed with love

    It seems
    it could last forever
    but no It looses its color
    It whithers and drops its petals
    in the times of its life

    But as it dies
    Our love grows
    in the memories
    of The Rose

    that brought us
    our love in life

    We live we die
    as does the rose
    but like the rose
    our beauty and love
    goes on in memory of
    The Rose

    The color of our love
    never fads even as
    the petal fall to the ground

    Our love goes on
    always in our memories
    of The Rose


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  8. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 11, 2011 at 7:11 AM

    Very true Ron... we all know the Rose is the symbol of love !

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  9. caroline magicNovember 11, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    secret love..dangerous and tempting

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  10. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞNovember 11, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    good one again

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  11. james sullivanNovember 11, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    I could never forget you!

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  12. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 11, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    Thankyou James... you are very kind indeed !

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  13. ron aNovember 12, 2011 at 5:07 AM

    All the best to you rose
    Have a great weekend
    Later

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  14. Sharon KrothNovember 12, 2011 at 11:25 AM

    It's those feelings that go with the words of love that are so hard to forget.
    Beautiful Rosie.

    Let your soul dance in those feelings,
    as those feelings will forever be kept warm in your heart.

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  15. Drifter **November 13, 2011 at 2:01 AM

    Different than your usual work. Very steamy...Glad you shared with us.

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  16. MoiMoii LawNovember 13, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    If you must sin, enjoy it. Otherwise, the feeling of guilt is wasted because it changes nothing.

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