Wednesday, November 16, 2011

A Touch Of Love

Hidden inside my soul

a serenade plays

when I think of you

we dance  a slow waltz

to the sounds of   the strings humming   sweetly

and  our bodies  sway in tune  making us  melt

 like putty  into  a  world   beyond  love    and  into   our own comfort zone 

  taking with us  nothing  but   pure  elixiar   that  only the two of us   can ever share 

forever    besotted  and  totally connected   by   sharing   one soul that just became fused  together 

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24 comments:

  1. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞNovember 16, 2011 at 4:16 AM

    Wow......

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  2. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 16, 2011 at 4:37 AM

    Thankyou Roadyking ... you liked my words then?, wrote this early this morning at breakfast .... my mind was in overdrive lol I tend to think rather clearly at this hour and late at night too for some reason !

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  3. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞNovember 16, 2011 at 5:27 AM

    Your writings are amazing....keep up the good work, please ;-)

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  4. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 16, 2011 at 5:30 AM

    I very much appreciate your comments and get greatly inspired by them all, I write freely from my heart and whatever words spill out from my imagination then they result in another poem !

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  5. Alain LFNovember 16, 2011 at 5:45 AM

    Remembering the past or thinking at the future ???

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  6. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 16, 2011 at 5:48 AM


    The future maybe .... that is not to say that their are not any skeletons hiding in my minds closet lol?

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  7. Drifter **November 16, 2011 at 5:54 AM

    Loves sweet chords strumming the strings of our hearts

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  8. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 16, 2011 at 5:56 AM

    A great comment Campinguy... thankyou !

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  9. Drifter **November 16, 2011 at 6:02 AM

    Thank you..

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  10. MoiMoii LawNovember 16, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    I have experienced sweet and dreamy moments like that but, strangely, love is not involved. More like a passing dream but memorable.

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  11. belita 747November 16, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Rosie, this is one of your best poems... I really love it... beautiful imagery, nice flood of words... Thanks!

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  12. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 17, 2011 at 1:16 AM

    Thankyou dear Belita for your beautiful comment .... I am very inspired by my friends comments always glad you liked this one , I wrote it very quickly indeed at breakfast!

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  13. Bernard CNovember 17, 2011 at 2:32 AM

    Feeling a bit like Wallace and Grommit reading this one Rosie :-)

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  14. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 17, 2011 at 3:15 AM


    Lol , your imagination is on track too Bernard thanks !

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  15. Initiative StainNovember 17, 2011 at 11:08 AM

    The touch of love reminds me of Sade - Rosie.

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  16. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 17, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    Oh yes, yes it does !

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  17. Initiative StainNovember 17, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    It's original and that of your own but it does. :)

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  18. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 17, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    Yes, all of my poetry is original.... I write from my soul too thankyou for your nice comment initiativestainx

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  19. Initiative StainNovember 17, 2011 at 11:43 AM

    We have known each other for over two years my dearest.

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  20. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 17, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    Yes we have indeed , a firm and comfortable friendship it is too my dear!

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  21. Else CederborgNovember 18, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    That is a very beautiful poem, Rosie.

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  22. caroline magicNovember 19, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    I love the Slow .Waltz

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  23. Franky BornyNovember 20, 2011 at 2:33 AM

    When the waltz has started
    The two of us dancing together
    Dancing in passion and Tenderness
    Untill the clock ticks hither....

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  24. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 21, 2011 at 1:24 AM

    Beautiful words to compliment my poem Franky thankyou my friend !

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