Saturday, November 19, 2011

Come Closer

Come closer  and    fall into  my open arms

taste  my  kisses   and listen  to my   heart beating    as  your  body   touches  mine

 feed me   on your love 

until I am  satisfied

that you    found   your   soulmate  and   that   the love we  shared  was  real

  and not just another dream that   faded  away   when the dawn came along but    the dream   you  had   that  became   so real

when  our   hearts met and began beating as one

 

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011

 

 

  

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19 comments:

  1. Dave ENovember 19, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    Very Nice, even if it reminds me of a song

    Dave x

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  2. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 19, 2011 at 1:32 PM

    Thankyou Dave, I wonder what song you thought ... I just wrote this very quickly an hour ago and then I posted it .... thanks for your nice comment , enjoy the evening my friend!

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  3. Drew .November 19, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    very tasty. And great image with the words.

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  4. caroline magicNovember 19, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    its a dream ..you wouldnt want to end ..

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  5. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞNovember 19, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    wonderful....as usual ;-)

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  6. dana everhartNovember 19, 2011 at 3:45 PM

    catch me when I fall.....but brace youself

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  7. Tajammal ♥November 19, 2011 at 7:38 PM

    extremely good , pleasing , it can be real.
    smiles
    *I need an airline ticket ;)

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  8. joe joedickNovember 20, 2011 at 4:29 AM

    closer ....... don't be shy more close ..... now it is better I can feel your warmth ..... but please, come even more close until you and I are one ......

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  9. Bernard CNovember 20, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    The one sounds like you have found your match Rosie, good for you - nice write :-))

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  10. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 20, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    I love all of your inspiring comments on this poem .... but... Have I met my match or not? good question I wish !

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  11. Franky BornyNovember 20, 2011 at 12:48 PM

    As soulmates together now
    We meet and elegantly bow
    To one another and here we stand
    Taking one another by the hand :-)

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  12. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 20, 2011 at 1:48 PM

    Beautiful words Parzifallissimo, thankyou very inspiring indeed !

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  13. Menno RomanticoNovember 20, 2011 at 11:19 PM

    When hearts meet there is no dream, but the taste of reality! Thx & hugs xx, Menno

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  14. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 21, 2011 at 1:22 AM

    Yes Menno your right ..... then that dream unfolds gently like a flower to flourish and be nourished with love and care !

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  15. Sharon KrothNovember 21, 2011 at 7:16 AM

    Come closer and fall into my arms,
    let me seduce you with my seductive charm.
    Taste my kisses and listen to my heart beating,
    as you bring my skin to a fiery heating.

    S. D. K. 11-21-11

    Thank you Rosie for your inspiring words of beauty and grace. Keep writing dear.

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  16. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 21, 2011 at 7:25 AM

    Wonderful Sharon ... you write with great depth of feeling just like me thankyou !

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  17. Sharon KrothNovember 21, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    Your words inspired me Rosie.

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  18. christina castanedaNovember 25, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    What a beauty! I must say this touches me a lot. thanks Rosiex

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  19. ghostt RiderNovember 26, 2011 at 4:26 AM

    ooooo ... very enticing

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