Friday, November 18, 2011

Night Flower

His lady was a night flower

she  lured  him  into the

the darkness of the  nights and  stole  his  heart  and   controlled

his mind

he was just  like  a toy

and  she pulled  all his strings

whenever she needed to play  her  games   of love 

and when  the  mornings came    she  left him  chained    to a big   iron bedstead   until   her hunger    grew

 he would    wait  untill  he  heard  her   voice    then  she  would   free him  from his chains

to  became   her   love slave 

to serve her         and feed her on  wild strawberries    and  her favorate pink Champagne

he  was orderd to  call her       Mistress  Pink 

untill  such times  as she  might  just tire of  him  and   free him from  his  role

 

 

 A  very different  poem for you all today, hope you will like it    all comments  appreciated    thanks Rosie

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12 comments:

  1. Marielle .November 18, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    Que bello mi querida Rosie..
    Gracias por compartirlo..

    Besitos del alma
    Marielle

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  2. Alain LFNovember 18, 2011 at 4:06 AM

    Slave To Love. Brian Ferry
    It instantly reminds me of that song.
    Were you listening to it when writing ???

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  3. Cinabear CinnamonNovember 18, 2011 at 4:24 AM

    Interesting. The iron an the fragility of a rose. Xxx gm

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  4. dana everhartNovember 18, 2011 at 5:11 AM

    been drinking ?...some serious Dom there

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  5. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 18, 2011 at 5:13 AM

    Exiting comment Dana .... I can see that your mind is straying a little lol after reading my words hug Rosie.

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  6. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞNovember 18, 2011 at 5:59 AM

    Oh My......"Love It"

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  7. Bernard CNovember 18, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    Dominatrix by the sounds of it - six months and he's out is the message most women hold dear to. A different kind of poem today Rosie - good for you :-)) Have a great weekend :-))

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  8. EnglishLady EnglishLadyNovember 18, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    Great comment Bernard.... thankyou !

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  9. caroline magicNovember 18, 2011 at 11:10 AM

    hot love ..rising passions

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  10. Drifter **November 18, 2011 at 2:47 PM

    Shows a dark, sad side to one that loves and is not really loved in return.

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  11. eevee lily ( hippy witch)November 20, 2011 at 7:24 AM

    very unusual

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  12. christina castanedaNovember 25, 2011 at 7:25 PM

    a captivating idea, a bit dark but only in one's imaginations. thanks.

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