Sunday, October 16, 2011

A brief affair

 

 A very short  but brief affair

the memories  hidden  safe inside    the two souls that became as one

 a beautiful friendship   simple   and full of  silly  laughter  and fondness for  the same  dreams

 never to  be forgotton

 a meeting  of  minds  on a perfect day   

 that will  be cherished

for  ever  and ever   

It was meant to be 

but   fate   stood in  the way

cruel  but   kind  to those    that  never   ever knew

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011

18 comments:

  1. Bridges between them can be fickle too :-)

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  2. Who can challenge fate! Nice words, Rosie!

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  3. the last line is very mysterious!

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  4. Fate is a tease - or an executioner ...

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  5. At least they will have the memories of hitting it off for a while.

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  6. Thankyou all for the very inspiring comments on this poem, Dannette picked up on the last line .... nobody got hurt only the two that became one !

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  7. ah beautiful.. a lovely dreamy event

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  8. This poems is filled with tears and smiles, laughter and pain. In the end, the pain is only felt by the two of them.

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  9. Yes , but they are left with sweet memories , better than nothing at all !

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