Thursday, October 27, 2011

Kissing In The Rain

In  my dream

I love you  without even  knowing  who you are

your kisses  drink me 

until I thirst for  more

your eyes    penetrate my  brain  untill My knees     become weak

 and when  we  kiss in the rain  

 I   burn   in the   heat  of your    burning   desire

   I am addicted 

 and now   I  cannot

quell   those      thoughts 

 because you have stolen  my soull Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011

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18 comments:

  1. Franki .October 27, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    You have Stolen my soul.......The Right words for true Love
    Thanks Rosie Very Nice
    XX

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  2. Menno RomanticoOctober 27, 2011 at 1:42 PM

    I wish i was straight........YEAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH! (lol)

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  3. Cinabear CinnamonOctober 27, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    Passionate poem lady rosie xxx

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  4. EnglishLady EnglishLadyOctober 27, 2011 at 1:45 PM


    Wow, rich comments on this new poem, just wrote it too thankyou all!

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  5. Franky BornyOctober 27, 2011 at 1:59 PM

    In your dreams
    it is as it seems
    lovers united
    passion excited:-)

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  6. EnglishLady EnglishLadyOctober 27, 2011 at 2:01 PM

    Thankyou Franky....... you always seem to inspire me with your beautiful verses my dear .... hugs Rosiex

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  7. Franky BornyOctober 27, 2011 at 2:32 PM

    It's an honor.
    Did not have much time to get inspired myself as I am writing and correcting many days now :-)

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  8. Bernard COctober 27, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    Dreams are ten a penny but then right dream is priceless :-) btw typo at kwell is spelled quell :-))

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  9. Marcia MorseOctober 27, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    so sweet - thanks for the thought -

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  10. EnglishLady EnglishLadyOctober 27, 2011 at 2:42 PM

    Thankyou Bernard for your comments , I have now typed in the correct spelling lol ...must be getting tired must go to my bed soon !

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  11. Bernard COctober 27, 2011 at 2:54 PM

    No problem Rosie, have a good night and sleep well, tomorrow will hear all about the dreams you had :-)

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  12. caroline magicOctober 27, 2011 at 3:01 PM

    beautiful feeling..warm rain..on your face..

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  13. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞOctober 27, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    Niceeeeeeee :-)

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  14. Venus ♥October 27, 2011 at 5:12 PM

    Niceeeeeeeeeeee indeed :)) *Sigh*
    Beautiful pen, dear Rosie......Someone may steel your heart for a season,
    but when they steel your soul the love is eternal.
    Thank you dear Rosie, another treasure in this one :)
    Love and Hugs,
    Venus
    ♥ xoxo

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  15. ron aOctober 27, 2011 at 7:37 PM

    Love wet kisses

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  16. Dutch BlondieOctober 28, 2011 at 5:44 AM

    another well written piece :o) keep up the good work! :o)

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  17. Lady Hawk MarieOctober 28, 2011 at 10:33 AM

    Very nice.
    One is lucky to find a love so deep and wonderful.

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  18. Alain LFOctober 29, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Hum waiting for the rain, usually not my cup of tea...

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