Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Its A Long Way

 

 

 Its a long way  to  come

to win my heart

I do not know  if you still wish to fly

maybe   you are still not free or  you    have  changed your mind

does not matter    now

 I have moved on

 and life  has to go on 

  the winter   is  setting in and   I  shall be kept cosy  and my body  will  be warm

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding2011
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13 comments:

  1. Initiative StainOctober 19, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    It a pends ...........yet nice.

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  2. caroline magicOctober 19, 2011 at 4:07 PM

    a.philosophical..one...

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  3. RôãĐΥ ΚΐήĞOctober 19, 2011 at 4:43 PM

    :-)

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  4. dana everhartOctober 19, 2011 at 7:44 PM

    someone is teasing you?

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  5. Eppe RuiterOctober 19, 2011 at 10:48 PM

    thank you

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  6. Drifter **October 20, 2011 at 3:13 AM

    The seasons change and time moves on....everything returns.

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  7. EnglishLady EnglishLadyOctober 20, 2011 at 3:16 AM


    Thankyou all for the very inspiring comments on this poem, very interesting ones too I may say!

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  8. ron aOctober 20, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Lucky? Yet, real Lucky!!!

    Some day bad luck is all you got

    I'm use to that

    Have a good one
    Later

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  9. Menno RomanticoOctober 20, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    Your poem give me a bit a sad feeling. I hope that he will fly and that he will keep you warm. And if he doesn't.,
    look with a new Eye for another man:)) hugs, Menno

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  10. Bernard COctober 20, 2011 at 3:15 PM

    Nice one :-))

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  11. ron aOctober 20, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    Just jump in and stop me any time you want


    I was there


    Trust me
    It was brutal
    Peace

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  12. Bernard COctober 21, 2011 at 6:26 AM

    Reading the heading made me think of the song..its a long way to tickle Mary- its a long way to go :--)

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  13. Angela zOctober 21, 2011 at 6:41 AM

    ~*~*~ You just never know....when it comes to Love ~*~*~*~

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