Thursday, October 27, 2011

Caged

 

 We share   our love

but it is caged

hidden  and secret

 the days go by

 and the love grows deeper  and deeper

 and perhaps one day  

that love  will be released

 so that  we can  taste  the sweetness  and  fulfil

our  long awaited desires

All Rights Reserved Rosie Fielding 2011

15 comments:

  1. And one day, Love ! oh yes
    I want to taste ......there is a desperate shortage of sweetness.

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  2. Love is full of sweetness.... we must pick the best fruits....sometimes we cannot have the fruit we desire because it is out of reach!

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  3. Caving in after while is the only healthy alternative thing to do :-))

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  4. A butterfly's life is the life for me.
    Fly on
    Have a good one
    Later

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  5. Thankyou for your very inspiring comments so far on this poem, please continue to inspire me dear friends thankyou !

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  6. Love is very sweet indeed especially if two lovers are connected deeply!

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  7. Yes, secret love.... more intense but magic if put together .... passion glows more !

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  8. mmm love the idea of released love - (((((((((((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

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  9. and the fruits of our desire will slake our hunger for each other

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  10. A Caged and Hidden love is so adventurous.......and then released.......there is ecstasy. Very loving & hot. Thx Rosie.
    xxx-love

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  11. Sharing our love which is encaged,
    We open its door while it is enraged.
    Attacks both of our hearts and bodies,
    While we sing passionate melodies.

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  12. Beautiful verse Franky, you really understand my words !

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